Dear Gimmie,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this to ask you about a trip , if you are free than you can join us in next month probably in the month of December. Me and my family have planned mini vacation in this winter to Maldives. Yet, my brother also was going with us but for some reason he wouldn't make it with us though his tickets were confirmed but the fare is non-refundable.
Hence, I thought to cross-check with you if you are interested and have enough time to hang out with us. Furthermore, we have reserved the passes on the 20th December till 31st of December, also we have arranged hotels, transport from airport to the motels. As you know my brother is in the army, he is called on the duty so he has to leave.
Nevertheless, If you are going to join with us then you will need to take some warm clothes, tracking shoes plus whatever is essential items to be packed. I will wait for your response till next week, till then you have a time to think and ask permission from your guardians.
I can't wait to hear a positive response from you.
Lots of love
Fairy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Gimmie, I hope you are doing...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Gimmie, I hope you are doing well. I am writi...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... am writing this to ask you about a trip , if you are free than you can join us in...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in next month probably in the month of December. Me and my family have planned ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...as going with us but for some reason he wouldnt make it with us though his tickets were...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irmed but the fare is non-refundable. Hence, I thought to cross-check with y...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... permission from your guardians. I cant wait to hear a positive response from y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34299516908 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3968311103 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.432176314 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197683661194 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718250564487 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481711576673 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11441283626 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480883360297 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.