Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join:•explain about the trip•explain why your brother couldn’t make it•giving details about the trip.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...ing you to invite you to my trip group. is it a surprise? recently I have organ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
... to my trip group. is it a surprise? recently I have organized a trip for pleasure to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...lanned to go to tokyo, Osaka and Kyoto. we could enjoy the hot spring around the F...
^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...se wine. Personally speaking, it's a amazing experience which make me too ex...
^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...led my brother John to joining my team. you know about him right? But unfortunately...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...of the tickets have all been booked. we will assemble at my home in 18th this m...
^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l arrived tokyo airport at night on 19th . Afterwards , my friend Linda will pick ...
^^
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...yo airport at night on 19th . Afterwards , my friend Linda will pick us up by car ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54301498379 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6792835869 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.5882352941 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0588235294 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214563491623 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054104737711 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723134281584 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112866230984 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893173587923 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.04 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.