your building does not have parking space. Write a letter to manager. Describe the problem. Suggest solution. Say why parking will benefits the staff
Dear Mr. Brown,
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am an existing employee of your company. I am writing this letter to bring to your attention an issue I am facing from a long time. The situation has gotten the worst now and I had no option left, but to send you a letter.
I hope that your are well aware about the unavailability of parking space in our office building, due to which, I used to park my car in the nearby paid parking lot. I was paying $50 every month and it added extra burden on my pocket. However, now that space went under construction and I had no other spot to park. Therefore, I kindly want to request you to introduce a new parking place in our building. I did some research and found that the land on the back of our building is on sale and think that it can be used as a parking place.
I believe you understand that the of construction of new parking lot will help to our staff numerously, which is major problem to everyone working in RBC, because people like me do not need to spend extra money and will saves a lot of time as we do not need to waste time to find a place to park.
Thanks for your consideration. I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I believe you understand that the of construction of new parking lot will hel...
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Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
... not need to spend extra money and will saves a lot of time as we do not need to wast...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22317596567 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41021422391 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6900020434 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243671506154 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746656208797 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571341462343 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118081197771 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610043546153 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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