some people say that it is better for young to get advise from older people than young people.Do you agree or disagree?
In this ultra-modern epoch, it is a point of discussion that getting adve from elders benefits rather than asking from youngsters. Undoubtedly, this notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. I, However do not agree with this statement and believe that seeking advise from young individuals can be equally important as from senior citizens. In the following paragraphs I shall put my arguments to support my view point.
There are plethora of benefits of getting advice from old people. The first and formest one is that eldery people can considered to be a great source of knowledge and can advice their juniors in judging human behaviour. In simple words, old seniors are the one who have seen both, their seniors and juniors and with years of experience they can provide better suggestions. To cite an example, if a person is in dilemma about being married at the age of 20 or 30, then it is obvious that only an elder can explain the pros and cons of both. Secondly, with age comes wisdom, old citizens acquired knowledge with their years of experience. Hence are more suitable to advise their children about future goals.
On the opposite side, In regards to particular fields the information of old people can be obsolete and new generation can be a better option to seen an advise.To elaborate this, it is irrefutable that new generation keeps themselves up to date with new technological inventions and developments. For example, when one has to buy a new computer and has to choose between two latest model definitely young juvenile can be more helpful to decide. what is more, similar thinking or same taste of fashion is a another benefit of seeking advise from same age group.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that both new blood and seniors see the world in different way and it is hard to choose one for seeking an advise. As both can have seperate perspectives and can beneficial in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65331998222 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0869122966 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152128382509 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474384961925 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498050614195 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862610421925 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493609424084 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.