Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing in order to report a small accident that I had while driving a rented car from your Auckland branch the 7th of July of this year.
Let me explain my situation. When I filled in the rental paperwork, I was advised not to drive on dirt roads. Therefore, I avoided these at all cost. Despite being extremely careful, the vehicle got a flat tyre as it was raining heavily and tree brunches were falling on the road. After this event took place, I attempted to replace the flat tyre with a new one, however the automobile did not have a spare piece. I had to incur in extra costs in order to problem-solve this situation.
I hope you could considerate the information provided in order to calculate the final rental quote since I had to spend an unexpected amount of money which could have been avoided. I would also like to suggest a revision of your safety policies to ensure the safety of your clients and provide a high quality service.
Yours faithfully,
Agustina Ciarla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing in order to report a small ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Auckland) must be used with a third-person verb: 'branches'.
Suggestion: branches
...driving a rented car from your Auckland branch the 7th of July of this year. Let m...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of money which could have been avoided. I would also like to suggest a revision o...
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Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h quality service. Yours faithfully, Agustina Ciarla
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Agustina Ciarla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61325966851 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53272864841 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7542415356 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164373238437 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469546261002 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489173635733 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108066155229 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534388270596 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.