Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the accident that happened while I was driving on Abc Street, Charlestown.
I am a recent customer of your rental company having rented an economy model vehicle for 5 days, dated from 21st to 26th of June.
Unfortunately, I had an unavoidable accident including the aforementioned car and another party. It was the other driver’s fault who failed to stop the car at the red light at the intersection I was passing through. Consequently, the other party’s car smashed the back of my car. The police came to make a report of the accident which is available at the police station in case of any need for further information.
Since the police established the other driver’s responsibility for the accident, I would like to ask for a replacement car till the end of our rental contract. I would like to commend your company’s professional attitude.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04191616766 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18901490378 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1074239546 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203390717762 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800109652299 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647151661846 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128064842191 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709149162469 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.