Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
You need to explain the following:
• when and where you hired it
• describe how the accident happened
• what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen. I am a customer at your car renting service. As you have known, I had an accident during my trip to Vung Tau driving one of your vehicles and the car’s license plate was 51-12345P. Therefore, I am writing this letter to give you full details about the accident.
I had signed the contract for renting the car from Monday to Wednesday and picked up at 22pm Sunday. On the way to Vung Tau, there was an unexpected accident on ABC Street. After turning left from the highway, there was a woman riding a motorbike crossing the street without looking for traffic. At that moment, I was driving at around 60 kilometers per hour and immediately hit the brakes. However, the car still drifted and I could not gain control over it. After the accident, I had already taken the woman to the nearest hospital for treatment. My family and I had agreed to pay for the medicine fees.
For the car’s damages, I suggest that you take a full assessment by the manufacturer’s staffs. I am willing to pay up to half of the repairing fee since I was not intended to commit the accident and was completely sober at the time it happened.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Truong Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours sincerely, Truong Nguyen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62946428571 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67585800063 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6828000894 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206015518573 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685502475328 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649149330558 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150568494888 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642734388293 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.