Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month You are not happy about this Write a letter to your insurance company In your letter explain Why you are writing to the

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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain
• Why you are writing to them
• Why you think the insurance should not be increased
• What you want them to do

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regards to the sudden notification I received from my account officer, about the planned increment of my monthly vehicle insurance value. I am deeply displeased with this new development as it was never envisaged when I signed my insurance agreement with Leadway Assurance.

The global corona virus pandemic has negatively affected me as my employer terminated my appointment two months ago. I did not receive any termination bonus because I was still under probation with less disposable income. In addition, my insurance agreement clearly stipulates that the insurance policy will remain fixed until I am ready to renew my policy. Consequently, the increment will be a breach of contractual agreement.

I will request the purported upward review be suspended until the world recovers from the pandemic. More so, ample notification of not less than four months be issued, to enable me gather the required funds.

I look forward to a positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Azukaego Umeononigwe.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, still, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.85567010309 441% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01979952116 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3930687123 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10293351901 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400915339744 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467516976276 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324103357012 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384487302411 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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