Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Why can’t you attend the party?
– Why did you enjoy working with him/her?
– Offer him/her to meet some other time.
Dear Samar,
I had received the invitation for your farewell party that will be held this week. Unfortunately, I won't be able to attend as my mother is feeling unwell this week and the doctor said that she has to be housebound for a while and I had to help her in the house chores and do some errands, aside from my work and my master studies.
Really, I will miss you at work as I get used to our meeting every morning at the company's coffee shop.
You are always smart and accustomed to tough problems plus your intellectual attitude to tackle the situation.
I enjoyed working with such sagacious and conscientious characteristics like you, you will always succeed.
By the end of next week, My sister will be here to give mum a helping hand and I will have some free time. Are you free to meet me on Thursday or Saturday? Any time after work will be perfect.
It is crucial to see you before you move. I am looking forward to meeting you.
lots of love,
Engy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samar, I had received the invitati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de from my work and my master studies. Really, I will miss you at wo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... morning at the companys coffee shop. You are always smart and accustomed to t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tual attitude to tackle the situation. I enjoyed working with such sagacious an...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ics like you, you will always succeed. By the end of next week, My...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...? Any time after work will be perfect. It is crucial to see you before you move...
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Suggestion:
...e. I am looking forward to meeting you. lots of love, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lots
... lots of love, Engy
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lots of love, Engy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4364640884 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50373183816 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3019948137 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224207387024 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912677283481 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683782497883 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105707904717 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715624663808 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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