Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Why can’t you attend the party?
– Why did you enjoy working with him/her?
– Offer him/her to meet some other time.
Dear Daniel,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. This morning, I received your message and I was glad to read that grab a new job. My hearty congratulations and best wishes to you for this accomplishment. But regretfully, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able to join your farewell party.
Actually, as you must be knowing, that my team has a project release at the same day, so we would be working late night until everything goes well. It is one of the most critical project that we worked on and that is time when our efforts would be recognized. I could not miss that event, as I am the linking chain between the clients and the developers.
It was my pleasure to work with you during our CVS project and I will always remember your diligent contribution in that project. You are a person filled with immense qualities. You tought me how to keep up a perfect balance between personal life and professional life. I will always cherish the time spent with you. persevere your hard work and keep on achieving success in your life.
I will try my best to see you personally before you relocate to new work site. However, I request you to take some time and visit our house with your family.
Best wishes for your future goals and achievements. Hope to see you soon.
Warm Regards
Harry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...arewell party. Actually, as you must be knowing, that my team has a project release at ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Persevere
...always cherish the time spent with you. persevere your hard work and keep on achieving su...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52208835341 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5318984 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8145768203 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2352941176 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234593401487 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843674829616 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535255189432 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138968399186 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549514673176 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.