Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
Give details about the course
Describe what equipment you will need for the course
Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability of conference center on 12 Jan from 3pm till 7pm for a special training course, which will be conducted by my company for it's employees.
As most of our staff has intermediate skill sets of various computer applications, the course has been designed to build advanced excel and power point skills amongst them and one of the renowned expert in this field will be taking this session.
In order to conduct this training programme, we would need atleast 15 computers, couple of mics along with the speaker in the hall, further we would also need basic stationary items and snacks for the group during the break time.
Would request you to also please let me know if their are sufficient parking slots available near the conference center, as most of the employees would be commuting through their own vehicle.
Kindly let me know the availability of the conference center, along with the possibility of all arranging all additional items mentioned above.
Would be looking forward for your response.
Your's Sincerely
Gaurav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...quest you to also please let me know if their are sufficient parking slots available ...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd for your response. Yours Sincerely Gaurav
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10382513661 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60104697576 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4009609613 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18503587117 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922819518642 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568791726824 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831087648033 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571245319213 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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