Your company has decided to organise a training course for the employees at a local Convention centre. They have asked you to contact the manager of the local Convention Centre
Write a letter to the manager of local to national Centre
-explain the trailer for the training course
-tell him what all facilities you're would like to have for your training course
-ask him about the facilities at the convention centre
Dear Sir
I am a native dweller of Noida who works in HCL company from last five years. The purpose of mind to penning down this epistle is to take your grant to organise a training course at your local conventional Centre.
The organisation of mine take a decision to organise a training course on "JAVA" language and they want to do it at your renowned and well furnished centre. It is computer language course and help employs to make their websites more eye-catching and effective. Moreover learning java will beneficial for both individual growth as well as organisation growth which will be helpful in acquire the break-throughs in the future.The course might be usher on first march which will take 20 days to complete.
I would like to tell you some possession which will use in during the course. As, it is computer language courses so, computers or laptops are the dire need to run it. Moreover, the air conditioner System will work properly, and the infrastructure must become for table such as chairs and tables etcetera. So, that no one can face any type of hurdle in between the training. Further more, I would also like to know about the facilities which you have in your conventional centres such as drinking water, parking system facilities etcetera.
I would be very grateful if you gave me the consent and other details as early as possible so that I could able to pass the information to my employer.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Aman
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-02-12 | amandhingra1 | 78 | view |
- You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks Which country would you like to visit Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice 57
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere .To what extent do you agree with this views 56
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons f 78
- Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. apologise for damaging the production.Explain what happened..Say how are you doing to fix the issue 61
- You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends Tell your friend about your birthdayExplain how much the visit would mean to youSuggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se a training course on 'JAVA' language and they want to do it at your ...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...bsites more eye-catching and effective. Moreover learning java will beneficial for both...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atching and effective. Moreover learning java will beneficial for both individual...
^^
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...l beneficial for both individual growth as well as organisation growth which will be helpf...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cquire the break-throughs in the future.The course might be usher on first march wh...
^^^
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ble such as chairs and tables etcetera. So, that no one can face any type of hurdle in b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78952656306 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2565078599 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210314362534 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649961714575 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817950302601 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100135247909 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805640475459 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.