your former home county family is coming to see you in your home country and stay for a week. 1) make plan to meet them at convenient location 2)suggest date and time 3) suggest some activity you may all participate in during their visit.
Dear Amir
I'm very sorry haven't written to you so long. I'm writing to tell you I made a plan for your tip to my place.
you are going to come here by the airplane, therefore, you will be landed in Mehrabad airport's foreign arrivals. after your family and you pass the custom there is a big advertisement about baby dippers, I'm going to wait there for you all. Don't worry you can miss it. I'll be there at 7:15 in december 15th, although your fly maybe be delayed due to the weather situation.
I arranged a seven-day plan for your stay in Tehran. Firstly, We should visit Tehran's museums and cultural centers as I know you're found of this stuff. after that women are able to go shopping. A new mall has just opened which can attract them. I planed a adveturous journey to the Alborz mountain, to be more exact Damavand summit. it would be great fun.
Best wishes for your family and you.
Amirreza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear Amir Im very sorry havent written to you so lon...
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Dear Amir Im very sorry havent written to you so long. Im writing to t...
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...ry sorry havent written to you so long. Im writing to tell you I made a plan for y...
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...ade a plan for your tip to my place. you are going to come here by the airplane,...
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... in Mehrabad airports foreign arrivals. after your family and you pass the custom the...
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...a big advertisement about baby dippers, Im going to wait there for you all. Dont w...
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...rs, Im going to wait there for you all. Dont worry you can miss it. Ill be there at ...
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...or you all. Dont worry you can miss it. Ill be there at 7:15 in december 15th, alth...
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... museums and cultural centers as I know youre found of this stuff. after that women a...
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...rs as I know youre found of this stuff. after that women are able to go shopping. A n...
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...rs as I know youre found of this stuff. after that women are able to go shopping. A n...
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...opened which can attract them. I planed a adveturous journey to the Alborz mounta...
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...tain, to be more exact Damavand summit. it would be great fun. Best wishes for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ishes for your family and you. Amirreza
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4371257485 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27396737133 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706586826347 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9428409405 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256912488778 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894908531101 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780903568307 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176116567216 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535039971646 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.