Dear Jane,
How are you? It's been a long time since we met. But you can't believe that how much excited I'm after knowing that you are going to be celebrated your 25th birthday.
As a matter of fact, I think you should organize a seashore party as you are living near the sea. It will certainly give you a peaceful birthday celebration, moreover only your beloved ones from friends and family should be there, because I think more crowd sometimes deteriorates the function enjoyment.
What you could do more is to arrange a professional photographer in order to save your birthday memories.
One more thing you should pay attention is the food; what kind of food stuff is highly preferred by your family must be there in the party. One more thing you should do to make party amazing are the games, choose some of them to kill the boredom of the party , and don't forget to play music.
Thanks to involve me in the suggestions, I hope you would find them beneficial. Happy 25th birthday my love.
Yours lovingly,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... been a long time since we met. But you cant believe that how much excited Im after ...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... you cant believe that how much excited Im after knowing that you are going to be ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to be celebrated your 25th birthday. As a matter of fact, I think you should ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of them to kill the boredom of the party , and dont forget to play music. Thank...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to kill the boredom of the party , and dont forget to play music. Thanks to invo...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to involve me in the suggestions, I hope you would find them beneficial. Happy 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, i think, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65934065934 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45585710834 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6241742201 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220729805598 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818670694604 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532429002024 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113749638715 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415748859892 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.