Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. Say what type of party should be held e.g themed,fancy dress,black tie event. Suggest a suitable venue.
Dear Sam,
I am writing to say how grateful I was to receive your invitation on the party you are holding next Friday. My wife and I have already prepared a present and going to have fun on your birthday.
You asked me any ideas about convenient and interesting place for the event and I would love to recommend booking barbecue zone in your neighborhood near the river. First of all, it's not far from your place, so your will not have to drive after the celebration. Secondly, your quests can enjoy fresh air from the river in a shade of the trees. I am sure it is amazing place for your event.
Let me share with another idea. In my opinion agreeable live music can create perfect condition for dances. I know "The C" rock band and I can arrange their live performance for free. I think your children would love their sound.
Finally, some of our friends don't eat red meat so you should have fish and vegetables for them. If you need help with preparation call me I would love to give you a hand.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the party you are holding next Friday. As you have asked me any ideas about thi...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...party you are holding next Friday. As you have asked me any ideas about this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k your children would love their sound. Finally, some of our friends dont eat re...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ound. Finally, some of our friends dont eat red meat so you should have fish an...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould have fish and vegetables for them. If you need help with preparation call me ...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all me I would love to give you a hand. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37125748503 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24988794586 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4854035145 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166226373427 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558873130242 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474252341407 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875873702902 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575600921013 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.