Your friend from another country is interested to visit your hometown. Write a letter to her and describe what’s the best time to visit. How she can enjoy her visit
Dear Sara,
I am really excited to finally see you in person as you have decided to come to my hometown. You made an excellent choice since Shiraz is one of the best historical places in the world and I am sure you would not be disappointed.
The best time to visit this magnificent city though is in the end of the spring when the weather is pleasant and trees are blooming with delicious fruits. Moreover, special activities are held at that specific time of year to celebrate the beginning of the summer.
There are variety of sites that you can visit, ranging from historical such as Persepolis to natural landscapes like the well-known waterfall near the city. Nevertheless, there are some places that are a must-see and Persepolis is one of them. Although most of the constructions have been destroyed due to countless wars and bad climate, it is still glorious and a worthwhile journey.
I am quite positive that you are going to enjoy your time here. Iranian are very hospitable and especially have a weak spot for a foreigner with colored eye and blond hair! Hence, you would be welcomed whenever you go. Just make sure to contact me as soon as you landed so I can come and pick you up.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Behnaz Yousefi
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- Some people believe that men and women are equal so women should be able to do any job they want and others feels that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women What is your opinion 79
- Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke Please say Remind him her what have you borrowed Explain what happened What you will do about it 44
- Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 84
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
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Dear Sara, I am really excited to finally see you i...
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... celebrate the beginning of the summer. There are variety of sites that you can ...
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...till glorious and a worthwhile journey. I am quite positive that you are going t...
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... Looking forward to hearing from you, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7130044843 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59732242397 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8661423252 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112265414645 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449180263774 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492287503943 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614690692197 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285752696074 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.