Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Languages are gateways to countless opportunities. While some people believe that students should be taught a foreign language when they enter the primary school, others argue that it is more beneficial to put it off till pupils reach secondary school. In my opinion, the benefits of such regulation outweigh its disadvantages. Therefore, it is necessary to put a foreign language in primary school curriculum from first grade.
On the one hand, some parents are worried that by introducing another language their offspring might get distracted from focusing on more important disciplines such as mathematics and biology. Since the time that a scholar spend at school is limited, in order to include a foreign language in the syllabus, the time dedicated to other subjects must be deducted. This particular change may have a detrimental effect on students’ performance. Moreover, learning another language may pose a threat to children's national identity as it may have a cultural impact on youngsters who have not fully embraced their own traditions yet.
Nevertheless, the value of knowing other languages has often been eclipsed by prejudicial judgments. Firstly, in contrast to common beliefs acquiring a new language significantly improves people cognitive abilities. For example, studies show that children who were struggling with math problems showed an impressive rise in their math grade after taking up learning a new language. Secondly, having knowledge about other countries' culture make young students more well-rounded and informed; it broadens their horizon and teaches them valuable lessons such as how to emphasize with other people regardless of their origin. Finally, younger children are more prone to learn new languages and are easier motivated. For example, new educational methods leverage children enthusiasm for playing to teach them new vocabularies through game boards.
In conclusion, although some parents might be concerned about the harmful side effects of teaching a foreign language from early years of school, as explained above the advantages of this inclusion is far more remarkable to be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58231707317 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94758740162 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.653180268 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.066666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281152916662 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085339134322 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787598363898 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169563975996 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825455486245 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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