Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Sohan,
I regret to inform you that I can't go to the cinema with you today which we planned the last weekend. I wish you can go along with max instead.
One of my cousins is recently in the town and he wants to do some sight-seeing before he leaves tomorrow morning. Initially, I wished you could join us on the outing only to realize later that the tickets of the cinema have been already bought and they cannot refund for the cancellation. So, why not watch the movie with max? I am not sure if you ever went with him before but I promise he is very passionate about films and makes a good company. you will be quite amazed by how much he knows about the personal lives of the star cast.
I hope he will be a good replacement and you will consider him your companion for today. Come along to my place this weekend and we might plan again to go together.
See you soon.
Your friend,
Sachin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Sohan, I regret to inform you that I cant go to the cinema with you today which w...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e about films and makes a good company. you will be quite amazed by how much he kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29479768786 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20716925287 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8969328853 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5454545455 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349642426891 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142234477855 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089489464645 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213280066401 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786939643016 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.