Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Peter,
I'm writing to tell you that I won’t be able to come to the movies with you this weekend because of the sudden change in the plans at my workplace.
let me explain in detail. last month, when we met I told you about my new project and how excited I was to start working on it. Unfortunately, there seem to be some programming issues, in order to rectify them, I have to visit my company's head office this weekend.
I was wondering if you would take Sabrina with you. She works with me and had recently joined the company. She lives alone and knows no one in the city. So, when I asked her about her weekend plans, she seemed free and was really excited to hear about the movie and agreed to come.
I know I should have asked you first before making any plans. But, don’t worry she is amazing, jovial and pretty talkative, just like us. You’ll feel as if you have known her for long. I've shared your contact details with her so that you both can coördinate and meet up.
I'm sorry that I had to cancel last-minute. We’ll definitely meet soon. Till then take care.
Best wishes
Laura
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| 2019-11-24 | Jyoti_dhillon | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-16 | anmol.anubha | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Peter, Im writing to tell you that I won't b...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...change in the plans at my workplace. let me explain in detail. last month, when ...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...workplace. let me explain in detail. last month, when we met I told you about my ...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...feel as if you have known her for long. Ive shared your contact details with her so...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you both can coördinate and meet up. Im sorry that I had to cancel last-minute....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49758454106 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3128041397 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8354409339 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1875 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9375 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200333840126 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619633140978 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750230553614 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106934508345 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696576257774 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.