Dear Paul,
I am writing this letter in order to help you to cope with your problem of forgetting things with time. I know this habit of omitting information might be causing trouble to you.
As far as I remember, you are facing this problem from a long run. At the very first, you started forgetting the names of people and now, this issue is growing with a great pace; becoming worse day-by-day as you recently forgot to submit the annual assignment on deadline.
Can I suggest you the ways you can deal with this difficulty? I think you should have a sitting with a psychiatrist because he or she may help you come out of this problem. And in case of remembering the submission date of documents or any other important events, you should activate some kind of reminders on your phone, calendar or clocks. Else-wise, if you are surrounded by any fear or tension, you are free to share it with me.
I look forward to hear from you. Pay my regards to your parents.
Your friend,
Ankita
- Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is governments responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it's individual who are responsible.Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. 78
- The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 84
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- Many people from rural areas are moving to the cities. What problems can this cause? What can be the solutions? 84
- Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ee to share it with me. I look forward to hear from you. Pay my regards to your parent...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... regards to your parents. Your friend, Ankita
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51666666667 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50837486123 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2570252816 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243950357385 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943102088709 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623290189141 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122970860155 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333004655209 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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