Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
describe the gift
tell how it will be delivered
explain why you chose it.
Dear Alex,
I'm glad to know that you have shifted to a new home and I'm writing to let you know that I've sent you one present to express my wishes on this occasion.
With regard to the gift, it's a handcrafted painting of a landscape, which I've specially made for you. It is fitted in an elegant wooden frame and I'm pretty sure that you and Pam would like this piece of art. The beauty of this colourful painting will add an extra charm to your house.
As far as its delivery is concerned, it will be delivered to you within this week by Fedex. Though Fedex is well-known for its timely delivery, let me know if it doesn't get delivered on time. As both of you and Pam would be at work during the day time, so I've asked them to deliver it in the evening. Alternatively, you can also track the courier with the shipment number FED478 to arrange a mutually convenient time for the delivery.
As for my choice of the gift, initially, I was a bit confused and after thinking deliberately, I thought to present you something handmade. I think handmade presents are more valuable for someone like you who love art and you always admire my drawings, so I hope that this lovely painting would brighten your new house.
Once again, congratulations on your dream house and write back to let me know how do you find it.
Best wishes,
Ell
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| 2020-05-18 | NS | 78 | view |
| 2020-03-29 | vadhrahvirk | 73 | view |
| 2020-03-21 | Ell | 72 | view |
| 2020-03-13 | vadhrahvirk | 77 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Alex, Im glad to know that you have shifted to a...
^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...that you have shifted to a new home and Im writing to let you know that Ive sent y...
^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ome and Im writing to let you know that Ive sent you one present to express my wish...
^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s occasion. With regard to the gift, its a handcrafted painting of a landscape, ...
^^^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...dcrafted painting of a landscape, which Ive specially made for you. It has a wooden...
^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...made for you. It has a wooden frame and Im pretty sure that you and Pam would like...
^^
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... its timely delivery, let me know if it doesnt get delivered on time or you can track ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ould be at work during the day time, so Ive asked them to deliver it in the evening...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as for, i think, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36480686695 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37842600046 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1044701015 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322056889131 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120914082006 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061210873929 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191111132198 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272666386625 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Alex, Im glad to know that you have shifted to a...
^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...that you have shifted to a new home and Im writing to let you know that Ive sent y...
^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ome and Im writing to let you know that Ive sent you one present to express my wish...
^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s occasion. With regard to the gift, its a handcrafted painting of a landscape, ...
^^^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...dcrafted painting of a landscape, which Ive specially made for you. It has a wooden...
^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...made for you. It has a wooden frame and Im pretty sure that you and Pam would like...
^^
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... its timely delivery, let me know if it doesnt get delivered on time or you can track ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ould be at work during the day time, so Ive asked them to deliver it in the evening...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as for, i think, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36480686695 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37842600046 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1044701015 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322056889131 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120914082006 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061210873929 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191111132198 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272666386625 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.