Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the gift
• tell how it will be delivered
• explain why you chose it.
Dear Simmy,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I came to know from aunt Jane that you have moved to new home and that too your own.
Many congratulations for this achievement. I have purchased a wonderful gift you. It was the scenery of the nature for the drawing room. I know that you like scenic view very much.
At first I have thought to ask the showroom for the delivery, but then I came to know that my uncle is having some work in your area. So I requested him to take along and deliver the precious present to you will lots of good wishes. Moreover, uncle will deliver that will full care and I have done all the packing by my own to ensure that I will not get damaged on the way.
It will be ideal gift for you. The portrait of the rising sun, which is believe to be lucky for the home, according to ancient mythology. Along with beauty of the nature it will bring bright future to you and your family. Attached light and vibrant color will make your drawing room more beautiful.
Hope you will like it.
Yours truly.
Mannu
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| 2020-05-18 | NS | 78 | view |
| 2020-03-29 | vadhrahvirk | 73 | view |
| 2020-03-21 | Ell | 72 | view |
| 2020-03-13 | vadhrahvirk | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...he portrait of the rising sun, which is believe to be lucky for the home, according to ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34653465347 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12396430991 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.252399843 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4666666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381553816246 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132313422525 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727191308163 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207570303367 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635215101222 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.