Essay topics:
Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
explain what you know about your friend's company
choose whether you accept or decline the offer
give reasons for your choice
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Essays by user amandhingra1
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Explain
explain what you know about your friends compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 26.3917525773 4% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 108.0 937.175257732 12% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 21.0 206.0 10% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.14069514293 3.78020617076 57% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 1.64682061579 2.54303337028 65% => OK
Unique words: 19.0 127.690721649 15% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.904761904762 0.622605031667 145% => OK
syllable_count: 29.7 290.88556701 10% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 4.34317383033 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237902980837 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237902980837 0.0766984524023 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13824859305 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964658650892 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 3.0 41.2886597938 7% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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