your friend is having problems getting on with a colleague at work. He/she has written to you for some advice
In your letter
-Thank your friend for their letter
- suggest some ways your friend could improve the situation
- offer some encouragement
Dear Clara,
I received your letter regarding your office trouble, sorry to hear that you are having a difficult time in getting along with your co-worker. I understand this is stressful situation, but I am sure there is a solution for every problem.
First of all, thankyou for sharing your problem with me, I assure that I will help you in every way possible. Let us examine the scenario and try to find some ideas to solve this tiff between you and your colleague. One way I think would work best is communication with him directly, as you informed me that half of his work was transferred to you, he might feel that the company does not find him competitive enough and in turn is taking his anger out on you. Invite him for a coffee and initiate a conversation and put forward your good intentions. Another way in which you can improve the situation is by involving him in projects,since you both are in same department, spending considerable time may clear his perception about you.
Do remember that no problem is big enough that it cannot be solved, try some yoga for your inner peace and be cheerful and courageous as you have been always.
Hope to hear the good news from you.
Warm Wishes
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 634, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , since
...ituation is by involving him in projects,since you both are in same department, spendi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, as to, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66359447005 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58506040992 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7519111687 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339826723321 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121179414765 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823281255994 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186371024357 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989870130311 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.