your friend is having problems getting on with a colleague at work. He/she has written to you for some advice
In your letter
-Thank your friend for their letter
- suggest some ways your friend could improve the situation
- offer some encouragement
Dear Ray,
How are you? How is family? I have been up to a lot of tasks at home and office, hence, I could not reply your letter early. Anyway, I would be glad to always respond to you with meaningful information and advice as quickly as possible.
As regards the letter you wrote to me seeking for my advice on how to get along with your colleague in the office, first and foremost, I would like to appreciate your effort to seek for my humble opinion, thanks for having some faith in me.
Naturally, people always have their differences that reflect in the activities which might unease the people in their vicinity; however, it is our duty to clear the air on whatever issue we have against each other. In this situation, I think you would get to the root of the problem if you can just set up a meeting between both of you and have a lengthy discussion. Another option is to write a letter to him to apologize for whatever mistake you have made.
Although I know it is may dent your ego to take up such responsibility and make the decision but you have to be strong and prove your maturity. Even if the solutions do not seem right at the moment, just think about the future and create some harmonious relationship.
Anyway, let me know what you think about these ideas.
Your friend,
Cole
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ray, How are you? How is family? I have been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, as regards, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47916666667 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41476577539 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1573628036 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5833333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364096498403 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119662189461 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109366433945 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159450187884 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934995765932 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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