Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell them what they need to bring
• tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting
• warn them about some things that might be challenging
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter in concern to your trip next week.
Well, I know you have read about everything such as weather and the stuff required during the visit even though, I thought it is my responsibility to tell you everything you need during this trip. First of all, as it is going to be cold be sure to pack some jackets and mufflers along with a cap and gloves which can keep you warm.
Furthermore, as you are visiting in winter you can go to Montreal to watch its scenic beauty which will give you a breathtaking experience. I even searched for some of the national parks as I know you love to see the wildlife and even got the tickets for that for you. Apart from this, you want telling that you want to meet one of the professors at McGill University for that I have arranged everything, you just need to go and meet him.
As the weather will be cold, it might be difficult to reach everywhere on time because of the snow and traffic jams. You are not habitual of such weather hence, you might be caught by illness, hence, please recheck with me after packing your stuff so that we can tally what else is required.
I can’t wait to see you. I am waiting for a reply from your end.
Best Wishes
Kinu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...htaking experience. I even searched for some of the national parks as I know you love to se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, apart from, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27160493827 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28405812968 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6708316212 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8461538462 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232702175111 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839425620717 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463154448753 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137410285412 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333784625986 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.