Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Tell them what they need to bring
Tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting
Warn them about some things that might be challenging.
Dear Emily,
How are you?
It’s such a lovely surprise to receive your email, and I’m extremely glad to hear that finally you and Matt got some time to make a visit to India next month.
I would rather love to make your stay at my country a memorable one. Although sky remains clear in the month of March, make sure to carry some warm clothes and rain jacket because sometimes it gets cold due to sudden rains.
There’re plenty of activities to keep you busy during your trip. As both of you’ve a keen interest to know more about the history and culture of India; therefore, I’ve made a list of some popular arts galleries and museums which you must visit to get better insight of our cultural values and traditions. Also, there are some famous wild life sanctuaries near to the place where I live which might fascinate you.
Unfortunately, I’ll be very busy with my office work next month, so I might not be able to accompany you on weekdays. I am worried that it would be difficult for you to understand the vernacular language; therefore, I would suggest looking for a tourist guide who can help you to understand the local language.
I’m eagerly waiting to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Vikas
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plenties'?
Suggestion: plenties
...ets cold due to sudden rains. There’re plenty of activities to keep you busy during y...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to see you soon. Best wishes, Vikas
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40089932282 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689814814815 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7441605719 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183536628644 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640598656186 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463066590344 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925093016872 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460035585313 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plenties'?
Suggestion: plenties
...ets cold due to sudden rains. There’re plenty of activities to keep you busy during y...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to see you soon. Best wishes, Vikas
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40089932282 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689814814815 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7441605719 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183536628644 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640598656186 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463066590344 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925093016872 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460035585313 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.