Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Say why a driving license is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips

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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Say why a driving license is advantageous
recommend a driving school
give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Monica,

I am good. Hope you are doing good too. I have got to know from Melfha, that you are thinking about learning driving and looking for some advice on the same. I appreciate your interest in learning driving.

There are many advantages in having a driving license. You can travel at your convenience instead of waiting for public transport. In case of emergency you can help your aged neighbors and relatives. Lastly, You can explore many places around on your own.

I would like to recommend Durai Driving school which is located near Government arts college in Rajappa Nagar. It is very near to your place. They are really best in teaching driving. They keep you at ease while learning, you don't have to panic. They even teach some good techniques which will make driving a cake walk for you. Also, they will make sure that you overcome the road fear before you complete your course with them.

Extend your driving classes until you feel confident. Practice driving inside the city on your own at lower speed. If you need any help do not hesitate to ask me.Eagerly looking forward to hearing from you about your driving class.

Best Regards,
Kirthi.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...a, that you are thinking about learning driving and looking for some advice on the same...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... I appreciate your interest in learning driving. There are many advantages in having...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ey keep you at ease while learning, you dont have to panic. They even teach some goo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...while learning, you dont have to panic. They even teach some good techniques which w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...de the city on your own at lower speed. If you need any help do not hesitate to as...
^^
Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eagerly
...need any help do not hesitate to ask me.Eagerly looking forward to hearing from you abo...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85221674877 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23305442572 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9559347157 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7222222222 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2777777778 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265898949906 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945489111786 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704762377583 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189893394256 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529865867169 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.