Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Agree to this arrangement.
– Say what time is suitable for you.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
Dear Friend,
Today I received your message telling me that you will send your son to our house this weekend to spend sometime with the kids.
From my side I don't mind he's welcomed. Saturday it's a sunny day the can play at the backyard and have some fun.
I suggest to arrive at 11:00am; since I'll go out for shopping in the morning to bring grocery for lunch and dinner.
Afternoon, I was thinking to take them to the Mall to grab sweets and after they can watch the latest Lion King movie, if you don not mind. When the film done we will be back home around 8:00pm. I'll prepare for dinner and wait for your arrive, both your husband and you to eat together.
Thank you and expecting your visit all at the end of this week.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...metime with the kids. From my side I dont mind hes welcomed. Saturday its a sunny...
^^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...h the kids. From my side I dont mind hes welcomed. Saturday its a sunny day the ...
^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...side I dont mind hes welcomed. Saturday its a sunny day the can play at the backyar...
^^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest arriving'.
Suggestion: suggest arriving
...at the backyard and have some fun. I suggest to arrive at 11:00am; since Ill go out for shoppi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... I suggest to arrive at 11:00am; since Ill go out for shopping in the morning to b...
^^^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...one we will be back home around 8:00pm. Ill prepare for dinner and wait for your ar...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 619.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35915492958 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97139079594 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732394366197 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7286945712 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235415987193 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078319300237 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899873119503 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11606845312 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711947594063 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.