The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? what solutions can you suggest?
These days money and power are ruling the world, these reasons are creating a conflict between poor and rich people and destroying many societies. That’s why this gap will cause many problems, and there must be solutions to solve this issue.
On one hand, several situations led to this gap between people, and cause problems. First, war is a major reason that will happen between people, due to poverty, starvation and diseases. Second, people will accept to get exploit by rich people, to work in low salaries or for food to stay alive, in this way rich people can reach their goals and make more profits without expenses. However, the world is controlled by rich people and this leads to a conflict in ethics and conducts, between the society and there won’t be respect among the strata of society. For example, Nike company pay around 3$ per day for its employees, and the shoes cost them around 6$ and they sell it for hundred of dollar or more.
On the other hand, there must be a solution, to stop this gap and avoid disasters between people. First, the government should put restrictions on rich people properties and companies, by increasing tax on their profit, and force them to recruit national people with good salaries and benefits, without abuse. Second, all people must be treated equally with no discrimination and racism, no matter their look, color or religion. Moreover, rich people must establish charities, to help homeless and poor people, find for them jobs and build orphans, free schools to remove kids from roads and teach them to become good people in the future. For example, a priest in my country founded his association, to help poor people and the funds come from rich people.
As a conclusion, conflicts between rich and poor people building a huge gap and causing problems, solutions can be found to decrease this lack. Rich people should help people in all sectors, and be a role model for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days money and power are ruling the world, t...
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Line 2, column 601, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...y. For example, Nike company pay around 3$ per day for its employees, and the shoe...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
...ployees, and the shoes cost them around 6$ and they sell it for hundred of dollar ...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ost them around 6$ and they sell it for hundred of dollar or more. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, moreover, second, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85885885886 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43013275045 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6346278129 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16081338979 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726098717436 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637957842837 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130238199532 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438862330245 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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