Your friend will visit your home town for first time. Write a letter to him, mentioning
suggest time of the year to visit
name some of places where he should go
invite him to meet your family
Dear John,
Hope you and your family all are fine.I have just received your letter mentioning that you are going to visit Ahmedabad, I am very excited to meet you. I am writing this letter to give you advice which would help you to plan your holidays in better way.
As the weather of Ahmedabad is quiet hot during summer, sometimes temperature raises up to boiling points. So, I'd like to suggest you to visit during winter between October to December only.
There are myriad places to be visited at Ahmedabad as it has rich historical background. But bu looking in to your taste, I'd prefer you to visit Ratanpol which the world famous street market where you would certainly enjoy shopping. What's more, you should go at Manekchowk to taste delicious and mouth watering dishes. Besides, if time permits, you should go to the mahatma temple at Gandhinagar where you can get an ample amount of information about the custom, the tradition and the history of Gujarat and Ahmedabad.
It has been long time since we have met, so I don't want to miss this opportunity to meet you. I invite you to come at my home which I have recently purchased at country side to avoid hustle and bustle of city. Moreover, our family members could mingle with each other and we would recollect our childhood memories.
Hope this information will help you and feel free to call me if you have any question.
Warm wishes,
Emma Wamsley
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...question. Warm wishes, Emma Wamsley
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3961335522 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7854829725 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3846153846 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152715213453 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535258529945 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493218978133 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790055473 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624113630901 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.