Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Jayraj Patel, a student of Diploma in Clinical Embryology course in the batch of December-January. I am writing this letter to ask your permission to discontinue this course for a time being, due to my professional commitment.
As you know that I am a full time Embryologist at MayFlower Women's hospital. So, it gets difficult for me to adjust with the course timing that are in the evenings. My working hours are from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm, and the embryology course starts at 6:15 pm. This gives me very little time frame, as the distance between the hospital and the class is quiet more, it takes about 20 mins for me to reach there. The timings are very neck to neck. This does not allow me to complete the coursework properly.
So I want to make a request to you to change my batch is it is possible. As you offer this course twice a year, so I would like to get enrolled in the April-May batch. The current situation is such that, I do not have the support of my colleague, as she is on a month leave. She will join back in end of January, so once she returns, I will be able to cut short my working hours, in order to attain the classes.
I hope this suggestion works for you, as this course is really important for me. I will be waiting for your positive reply.
Thank you.
Yours Faithfully
Jayraj Patel
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar Sir/ Madam, My name is Jayraj Patel, a student of Diploma in Clinical Embryol...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., due to my professional commitment. As you know that I am a full time Embryolo...
^^
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... commitment. As you know that I am a full time Embryologist at MayFlower Womens hospit...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3557312253 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54580436061 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3795632276 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268006523124 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967851067967 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680535458613 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151546258641 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260051192889 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar Sir/ Madam, My name is Jayraj Patel, a student of Diploma in Clinical Embryol...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., due to my professional commitment. As you know that I am a full time Embryolo...
^^
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... commitment. As you know that I am a full time Embryologist at MayFlower Womens hospit...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3557312253 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54580436061 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3795632276 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268006523124 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967851067967 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680535458613 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151546258641 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260051192889 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.