Dear sir,
I am writing with regards to the closing of a sports and leisure club owned by you. As it is the only fitness centre in our local community thus closing it will have a huge impact on our it.
Firstly, I along with my family is very much involved with doing a lot of activities in it such as my parents attend yoga classes, I play badminton and my brother practice tennis. In addition, my sister is a Zumba student at the center. Thus, we rely a lot on it for fun and fitness.
Moreover, not only my family, but it is a great benefit to the community as most of the locals work in IT department and dependent on the club for keeping themselves active. Also, due to performing activities in a group, they get time to get in touch with each other, Hence better social environment.
It can be clearly seen the bad influence of closing the club on locals. for instance, it will reduce the physical activities for them along with the social gathering. Similarly, they will be required to travel far for gym or sports club. As a result, they will avoid it due to lack of time.Therefore, shutting the club is not a good step for our community.
Finally, I request you to give a thought about it.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a sports and leisure club owned by you. As it is the only fitness centre in our lo...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...nfluence of closing the club on locals. for instance, it will reduce the physical a...
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Line 8, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... they will avoid it due to lack of time.Therefore, shutting the club is not a good step f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43859649123 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57915621544 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7087512499 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8461538462 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962441578972 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400156742127 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440703279602 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449581815905 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336187768057 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.