Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
Explain why the centre is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request you to reconsider decision of discontinuing the sports and leisure centre to save money.
Let me first draw your attention to how we use the centre. Like most families in the neighborhood, the ladies of my home are part of yoga classes. The youngsters of the family often play badminton and swimming. Although I am not part of any sport activities, I have participated in numerous social events that were organized in the centre.
Moving on to the importance of the centre, It would be an understatement to state that centre is a major factor in keeping the locals together. The place acts as an escape from our mundane lives. Also, it gives an opportunity to people in the society to have life outside the digital world.
In the end, I would like to say that though I understand the decision of the council, however, I personally feel it would impact both physical and psychological wellbeing. I hope that council will rethink the decision.
Regards,
Madhulika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81714285714 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83841864568 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8383793866 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23305427052 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631287345401 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728445835408 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12786720984 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881979068931 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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