Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council in you letter
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the locality
• describe the possible effects on the local people is the centre closes
Write at least 150 words
Do no write any addresses
Begin your letter with
Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to the article in Hindustan times dated 24th September stating that your department is deciding to close the sports and leisure centre in our society. I would like to express my views on the necessity of having the sports centre and benefits it provide to the people of our community.
I along with my family and friends spend most of our time after office hours in the leisure centre. We spend our quality time paying many indoor and outdoor sports for instance table tennis, cricket, badminton and so on. After all it not only relieves us from the daily stress but also helps us to keep physically and mentally fit and healthy.
The sport and leisure centre are of utmost importance to our society. It not only beneficial for the older generation but also provides many benefits to the younger generation also. They by playing sports will be able to keep physically and psychologically healthy. Moreover, it will also help to develop sporting spirit among the young generation and help them to excel in the field of sports in future.
If the sorts and leisure centre will be closed it will have a negative impact on the people of the society. Without physical exercise they will suffer with many health issues like obesity. Furthermore, Children will spend most of their time playing video games and watching television which will affect their eyesight.
I hope that you will take my views into consideration and will take the decision that will benefit the people of our society.
Yours faithfully
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...aving the sports centre and benefits it provide to the people of our community. I alo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ovide to the people of our community. I along with my family and friends spend ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...many benefits to the younger generation also. They by playing sports will be able to...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lp them to excel in the field of sports in future. If the sorts and leisure centre will...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isure centre will be closed it will have a negative impact on the people of the s...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. Yours faithfully Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, after all, for instance, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91791044776 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46778080077 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6135695228 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158519595957 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627598706982 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576023616991 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870687681027 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062388653791 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.