Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Mr. Iyer,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I was in your hotel day before yesterday to attend a conference and in hurry left a folder which contained my important documents.
As far as I remember, this may has happened in the session immediately after lunch when we all were asked to assemble in the conference hall on level 2. I had to make a presentation and as a result I used the podium which was placed to the right side of the projection screen. I kept a few things there including the folder. Although I was aware to collect my things back, I forgot to pick this which probably lied in the second shelf of dais.
This dossier contains the expansion plan of my current business and last three years balance sheets. I am in Chandigarh for a meeting with foreign investors and these documents are extremely important for discussion. I would request you to send the same through a courier or otherwise as fortunately my meeting is to be held at your property only in Sector 17 day after tomorrow, so if any staff member is travelling to my current location, then he can bring the same and hand over to me.
I shall be highly obliged if you can take an early action and do the needful.
Yours Sincerely,
Navpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bring the same and hand over to me. I shall be highly obliged if you can take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, then, as for, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49344978166 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58515283843 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9026157934 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851125390361 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330859473254 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458361572381 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474772519745 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444588647806 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.