Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is in regards to the recent news in our community that Our local council decided to shut down the
services of our sports and leisure centre.
Myself and my family are regular visitors to this sports centre. I spend my evenings swimming in the pool along with my friends, which make me to relax after a hectic day at work and keep myself healthy and fit. Also I visit every weekend with my family to play badminton.
During my visits to the centre, I observed that most of the children and adults in our community find this sport centre very near and feasible to spend their time and play sports. I strongly believe this sports and leisure centre plays a vital role in our community which encourages local people to stay fit and relax from their busy and mechanical schedule.
Decommissioning of this sports centre can possibly leave a negative impact on the our Community people's physical and mental health because people feel lazy and difficult to find other sports centre which might be far from our community.
As one of the residents of our community, I strongly recommend you to reconsider the idea of shutting down the sports ans leisure centre. Hope you will consider my suggestion.
Your's faithfully
Gowthami.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, This is in regards to the recent news in...
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..., This is in regards to the recent news in our community that O...
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...ices of our sports and leisure centre. Myself and my family are regular visitor...
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...t work and keep myself healthy and fit. Also I visit every weekend with my family to...
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...end with my family to play badminton. During my visits to the centre, I observ...
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...om their busy and mechanical schedule. Decommissioning of this sports centre ca...
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Suggestion: can
... Decommissioning of this sports centre can possibly leave a negative impact on the our Comm...
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...can possibly leave a negative impact on the our Community peoples physical and mental ...
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...tive impact on the our Community peoples physical and mental health because peopl...
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... which might be far from our community. As one of the residents of our community...
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...econsider the idea of shutting down the sports ans leisure centre. Hope you will consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84722222222 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44843511934 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578703703704 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0271375968 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177192469729 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808408036549 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043764092734 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927531740091 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252000001451 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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