Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council in you letter
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the locality
• describe the possible effects on the local people is the centre closes
Write at least 150 words
Do no write any addresses
Begin your letter with
Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the news article in Hindustan Times dated on 24th April,2021 that department is closing a sports and leisure centre. The reason for the same is just to save money which I really don't appreciate and would like to express my views on it.
We have a group of five people and our office is nearby this sports centre. So, after working hours; we go there daily and play many indoor games like badminton,table tennis,game of cards etc. It not only helps us in reliving our daily stress, but also keep us physically and mentally fit.
The sports and leisure centre is utmost important for each member of the society.Many of the senior citizens can be seen walking and jogging during morning and an evening hours in this centre.The young children and others do cycling and play cricket as well.
If in particular this centre is closed, this will have a tremendous negative impact on the soceity overall. Their routine will be affected badly.
I hope you will take above views into consideration before taking a decision.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhakar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with reference ...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2021'.
Suggestion: April 2021
...rticle in Hindustan Times dated on 24th April,2021 that department is closing a sports and...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me is just to save money which I really dont appreciate and would like to express my...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , table
...nd play many indoor games like badminton,table tennis,game of cards etc. It not only h...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , game
...indoor games like badminton,table tennis,game of cards etc. It not only helps us in r...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...mportant for each member of the society.Many of the senior citizens can be seen walk...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ing and an evening hours in this centre.The young children and others do cycling an...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re taking a decision. Yours faithfully, Prabhakar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, in particular, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82722513089 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56377763958 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712041884817 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2713777665 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149854526118 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493270168639 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447055800219 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650878483991 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448826872731 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.