Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement asking for volunteers to work on non-pay basis for assistance at the hospital. I intend to offer my services for this cause.
Currently I am working part-time and have spare time for such activities. By nominating for this purpose, I will be able to contribute to the society. It would be pleasing to know that my small gesture can go a long way in putting smile to someone’s face.
I have a certificate in nursing which I acquired along with my college degree. Through this certification course I am equipped with the basic standard operating procedures for some common medical related activities. If required I can separately send a list of medical procedures that I am certified to perform. I am also adept at using computer and would like to help in any office or administration tasks.
I am available every Tuesday and Thursday. You can also assign me to a job on Friday afternoon. My weekends are currently reserved for some other activities and hence I will not be available on Saturday and Sunday.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Tarun Goyal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... to contribute to the society. It would be pleasing to know that my small gesture can go a ...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...some common medical related activities. If required I can separately send a list o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90862944162 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99174743367 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6015500954 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0714285714 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203085633185 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626524250034 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656530911387 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106522829527 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569515919869 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.