Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
My name is Carron and I am writing this letter to let you know that there is a person who has a deep contribution in developing and structuring the society, so I would like you to nominate his name for an award which you advertised in Dawn newspaper on 12th of August 2019.
His name is John, and he is a generous and gold-hearted person because of his kind behaviour and sacrifices of his almost entire life to serve and protect humanity by providing shelters to orphans, food to needy people, medical aid and education to the poor.
One of his legacies is to build a community centre where people go and ask for help to resolve their issues and recently when an old lady in my neighbourhood was suffering from starvation for many days, he right away provided meals, medical help and moral support to that lady and ensure her that he was going to look after her that she would not suffer from the same problem again. .
i would like you to nominate his name for a humanitarian award which is specifically for those who assist the nation all the time and want to promote the love and kindness among people.
I hope you will express your views.
Yours sincerely,
Carron
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d was suffering from starvation for many days, he right away provided meals, medi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...not suffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his na...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his name for...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his name for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59534883721 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49359605029 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.290380817 44.8134815571 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.666666667 76.5299724578 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 16.8248392259 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212410812433 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104796655175 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561604805493 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106458275252 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634658006578 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.