Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am happy to hear that your journal "Times of India" is offering an award for all those helping our community. I would like to nominate Mr. David, retired Principal of Government Girl's High school for all his good work done so far. He had helped his students a lot in his lifetime, both during his service and after his retirement.
The school in which he rendered his service didn't had a lending library for their students. Being a responsible person he started creating one, spending from his own pocket. Now the library has become a dwelling place of knowledge with more than 2000 books for students in completing their project work and learning new concepts. Moreover, he hired a person to clean and track records of books in the library.
Amongst all other people nominated so far, I believe Mr. David deserves "Helping Hand" award for all the help he had rendered so far, as a Principal.
I look forward to hearing from you soon upon the announcement on award winners.
Yours faithfully,
submitter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (High) must be used with a third-person verb: 'schools'.
Suggestion: schools
...ired Principal of Government Girls High school for all his good work done so far. He ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g his service and after his retirement. The school in which he rendered his serv...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...school in which he rendered his service didnt had a lending library for their student...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93854748603 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70207472648 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.727896922 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168481829391 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669166339709 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635638010125 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096830538087 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407829675135 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.