Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing.
Write a letter to the librarian in your letter
-describe what you like about the library
-say what you don’t like
-make suggestions for improvements
Respected Sir/Madam,
As the public library is always helpful to common public for their studies, I am writing this letter to provide you my view-point with regards to public library, its best features along with the area in which it needs to improve. .
I am a final year student and I am using public library from a long period, I can say from more than 5 years. I regularly visit library for my study purpose. I have also made lots of new friends and they are brilliant and very knowledgable. it has wide space and fully furnished which is a good sign and which attract more student to study here. The fees are very nominal as it is to be used by general public. it also has a wide range of books collection so those member who enroll here will not be upset for not finding any book as it is always available here.
In relation to drinking water area, now a days it is not be kept cleaned and the water also not purified as lots of dust are reflecting in it. which is ultimately related to a student health. If the students become ill because of un-healthy water, soon it will create a major accident in the public library.
Hope you will consider my view points and take necessary action which will benefited to a common citizen of this county.
Your Sincerely,
Praful Shah
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-01 | bhanprakash23 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-26 | Praful Shah | 78 | view |
| 2019-03-27 | Judy_Pri | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir/Madam, As the public library is always helpful...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted Sir/Madam, As the public library is always helpful to common public for t...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the area in which it needs to improve. . I am a final year student and I am u...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rly visit library for my study purpose. I have also made lots of new friends and ...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ey are brilliant and very knowledgable. it has wide space and fully furnished whic...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...are very nominal as it is to be used by general public. it also has a wide range of books coll...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... as it is to be used by general public. it also has a wide range of books collecti...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this member' or 'those members'?
Suggestion: this member; those members
...has a wide range of books collection so those member who enroll here will not be upset for n...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... In relation to drinking water area, now a days it is not be kept cleaned and the water...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...In relation to drinking water area, now a days it is not be kept cleaned and the water...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48305084746 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38076406424 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5070627266 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144180750871 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495863782327 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511254982849 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585956621102 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657490802806 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.