Your manager is going to retire after 40 years of service. Write a letter to the assistant manager to suggest a retirement event.
– Explain how he influenced you at work.
– What kind of event do you suggest?
– Propose a gift from the company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing regarding sharing my suggestions about our manager retirement event plan. Also, I would like to share my ideas that how we can plan it and which gift suitable for him.
First up all, we have learned many good things from him that how we can achieve our life and where we can gather our knowledge. He is really charismatic and optimistic person and he never made blue moon to anyone. I am really admired about way of his work and whenever he tackled the situation and easily manage with his stakeholders. We are all very eager to celebrate this farewell event. Overall 350 persons will attend his farewell party so we can plan it on the Empire hotel so that we can accommodate easily with all the members.
Furthermore, I would like to suggest to give an unforgettable gift to him. I can remember that one of his interviews, he mentioned that he is very passionate to go to Himalaya with his family. So we can plan it arrange the family package to him. Definitely, he can mesmerize and he will never forget about this trip. Please share your ideas.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
S. John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arranges'?
Suggestion: arranges
...laya with his family. So we can plan it arrange the family package to him. Definitely, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, really, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63942307692 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55515616743 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9782754755 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9285714286 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161829931936 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630434505524 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541102558056 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110863309317 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411647480128 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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