Your work in a company and need to take a certain course. Write a letter to your manager and say
Explain why you need this training course
Where and when you will take it
how will the company benifit from it
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to request you to provide training to our team members to handle it easily for the upcoming projects.
To begin with, team members who are currently working in reporting side and as you know this project is going to complte on sep 20 th and upcoming projects are more and more on analytics side and team members who don't aware of this technology. Also, I have discussed this course an outside and selected one quotation which one suitable for our budget. Main Focus Infotech company is providing analytics course which one near to our company that exactly 10 minutes we can reach the destination and opposite to the park hotel.
I would like to inform you that we will get benafit to provide training to existing team members and no need to recruite new employees from analytics backround because they are very consliest resources in the current market.
I am looking forward your reply.
yours faithfully,
john.
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| 2018-09-03 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... on analytics side and team members who dont aware of this technology. Also, I have ...
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Message: Use simply 'Focus'.
Suggestion: Focus
...tion which one suitable for our budget. Main Focus Infotech company is providing analytics...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I am looking forward your reply. yours faithfully, john. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45972919196 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9032578325 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207404445294 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903745762187 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321905720528 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113641930501 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250215933164 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.