Dear Mark
I might want to bring to your notice that canine Bruno has been acting irregular the previous evening.
While I was in a profound rest in night, I was shaken up by an abrupt yapping sound woke me up at 3:00 am, shockingly Bruno was running in a bizarre manner in your nursery, as I saw from my window for couple of minutes, it ended up being endless. Examining the circumstance it appeared there was a sort of uneasiness in his activities.
As I get up at 6:00 am and need to leave for office, it has been hard for me to get a decent night dozing and focus on my work. Because of money related year shutting, my calendar is occupied and I arrive late to home. In this way, a great rest is an absolute necessity for me.
On my approach to morning walk I met with a veterinarian, he proposed to visit him in the facility. His contact subtleties are with me and can be shared in the event that you require.
Much obliged
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark I might want to bring to your notice tha...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bizarre manner" with adverb for "bizarre"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t 3:00 am, shockingly Bruno was running in a bizarre manner in your nursery, as I saw from my windo...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...event that you require. Much obliged John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29444444444 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48587987751 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.455005383 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115456485611 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387088768417 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352710144983 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691972243612 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129950046375 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.