Weather governments should allocate substantial amount of budget on improving roads and highways, or instead governments provide more budget on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? In my opinion, either of the two are interrelated, but for frequent commuters improving public transport would be meaningful.
Having a good roads and highways will be beneficial in terms of saving the time of commute or running and maintenance of the vehicles, on the other hand having new roads and highways, will require blocking of roads and maintenance work. Which will result in traffic jams and people spending more time on the journey.
As the population is on rise and fuel prices are up, a better public transportation system will be effective and help the common man for all ages yet the con of it can be increase in the fairs.
So, as far as seen on a larger scale, enhancing the public transport will be more fruitful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04516129032 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88152462824 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7435575664 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33055987056 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156635568544 0.0766984524023 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152703151235 0.0603063233224 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174148950899 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152272827664 0.0580467560999 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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