Dear Mr. Smith,
I have recieved your last letter due to dissatisfaction with the voice of my piano. To tell the truth, I had no idea that you are next to the room which I play piano. I am writing to to say about the reasons of that and apologise you because of the inconvenience that I caused for you.
As a matter of fact, I have moved this flat 2 months ago and I was not aware of the narrowness of walls that easily transfer every voice. In fact, I am going to participate in a significant concert that needs to be ready. So, I had to play piano most of the times. Furtunately, when I shared this matter to my tutor, she suggested me a place which I found it so suitable.
In fact, I will transfermy piano to that place with the help of my friends today. please let me apologise for the noise that bothered you a lot and thank you because of your patient.
Yours sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...e room which I play piano. I am writing to to say about the reasons of that and apolo...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...lace with the help of my friends today. please let me apologise for the noise that bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in fact, as a matter of fact, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23121387283 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5326627689 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4686002162 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236597170998 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946758251919 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100107844878 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155801560329 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962300822571 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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