Dear Sir/Mam,
I saw your letter on my welcome door mat in the morning which describes that you have suffered in sleep last night due to the noisy environment in my house. And, I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused to you.
Last night, I invited my new colleagues for a dinner party because I have started working in a new company. So, I planned a get together to know my office mates better and become more friendly with them. The party become more entertaining due to loud music along with drinks which disturbed the serene environment of your society. And, I apologize for the noisy night that caused you headache and fever. I will ensure you that I will organize a party with a good music and not with a loud stereo music albums.
Also, I did not knew that we have a party hall in a society for the such occasions. Therefore, in future, I will plan all such special moments in the party hall. So, any local of our society does not get affected like last night. Again, I am really sorry for my flawed actions. Apart from this, I would be pleased if you come for an afternoon tea at my house to get to know each other.
I hope you will accept my apology and invitation for an afternoon tea.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...tereo music albums. Also, I did not knew that we have a party hall in a society ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...iety for the such occasions. Therefore, in future, I will plan all such special moments i...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45217391304 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39452747212 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1497303303 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193072525191 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689529298519 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511126788895 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120995219798 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483111025557 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.