Dear Mrs Smith,
I am writing in regards to the noise complaint you raised on last Friday that was coming from my house.
As my house is under renovation, the shifting of the furniture is creating most of the noise. My living room has most of the detachable piece of furniture like sofa, cabinets and dining table set, that i was moving last week and this was the reason for disturbance.
I am really sorry for the whole situation, as I did not intend to cause trouble to you and other neighbors. I know it gets difficult to work or relax when there is a lot of noise coming from your neighborhood. So, in order to make this easy for everyone, i have planned few things about how shall i proceed with my renovation plan, which i would like to discuss with you.
I have written a time request form for you and few other neighbors, which will help me to perform such noise causing activities when no one is at home, so by doing so no one will get disturbed.
I hope this suggestion works or you and i will be waiting for your response.
Thank you
Yours Faithfully,
Jayraj Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing in regards to the noise complaint you raised on last ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fa, cabinets and dining table set, that i was moving last week and this was the r...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...have planned few things about how shall i proceed with my renovation plan, which ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... proceed with my renovation plan, which i would like to discuss with you. I ha...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I hope this suggestion works or you and i will be waiting for your response. Tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42574257426 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44157291639 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4119688362 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260117100289 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111067056901 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750564695986 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13079873242 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673169205872 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.