Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
• thank them for the invitation
• mention what plans you already have
• suggest when you can meet them
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr and Mrs Pattinson,
Hello, how are you? Hope you both are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to apologise that I will not be able to attend the party that you are holding next Saturday.
I thank you both for inviting me for the house warming party that you are organising next Saturday. I am very grateful for the same.
However, I will not be able to attend the party as I have a preschedule plan. Next Saturday I have to attend the 50th Wedding Anniversary of my Uncle and Aunt. The party is to take place in Hotel Radisson and I have been given the responsibility to arrange the food, drinks, decorations and cake for the couple.
I hope we can meet this weekend for a dinner at The Taj Hotel and spend some quality time together. Please do let me know when can you do that.
I wish you all the best for your party.
Take care and see you soon.
With love.
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that you are organising next Saturday. I am very grateful for the same. Howeve...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon. With love. Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36046511628 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31289417145 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4591630852 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382832715758 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11180819984 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958205218754 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158767962904 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108755894383 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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